Sunday Snippet – CUP OF SUGAR – Can’t Look Away
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Today we’re in Conn’s head, as he and Nia are sharing the only motel room available during a horrible snow storm that forced them off the road late on New Year’s Eve. Conn is watching TV when Nia steps out of the motel bathroom in her pajamas…
Her pale-pink pants weren’t see-through, but they might as well have been, because it was plenty evident she didn’t have anything underneath. With each step she took, the little tank top shifted, rising to tease him with a hint of creamy skin. Those pants rode damn low on her hips. Hips he needed to run his hands over while she rode him.
“Oh, look…” she pointed at the TV while crawling onto the bed, “Robin Thicke is performing.”
Conn didn’t want to look. He didn’t care who was performing. Hell, they could dedicate the next song to him, live from New York City, and he still wouldn’t give a shit.
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9 Comments
Charmaine Gordon
Just wonderful with description and a bit of innocent dialogue. Smiling as I reread the eight. Thanks, Karla.
Gemma Parkes
Smoldering snippet! Love how his mind is so distracted, very realistic!
Sarah Cass
LOVE it! Damn do they want each other bad…great scene.
A.S. Fenichel
LOVE this book and these characters. Great snippet!
Veronica Scott
Made me smile! I love that he keeps his concentration on the important things, so to speak. Great snippet!
Sandra Nachlinger
Sounds like they’re going to be sharing more than just a room! LOVE your steamy snippet from the guy’s POV.
Millie Burns
Very funny. I like how she’s trying to draw attention away from herself…but it’s not gonna work. She could show up in old man pajamas and he’d be all over the moon for her, but the way she’s dressed…oh my!
Caitlin
She’s either not paying attention–or messing with him. Can’t tell which, but he’s definitely suffering.
Colette Rasmussen
I love how distracted his thoughts are here.