Sunday Snippet – CUP OF SUGAR – Pretzelgasm
Thanks for stopping by to read my Sunday Snippet. This eight-sentence bite is from my recent release, CUP OF SUGAR, and comes to you as part of the Weekend Writing Warriors meme.
If you’ve been following along on Sundays, you already know that Conn and Nia have been neighbors for eight months, during which Conn has been pulling out all the stops (and taking off his clothes near the window) to get Nia’s attention. But Nia has a rule about dating neighbors, so she has been doing her best to avoid the hunky man next door. (Though she has certainly enjoyed watching him get into his shower.)
Currently though, they’re sharing a motel room late on a snowy New Year’s Eve. (Catch up on previous snippets here.) They’re watching TV (well, sort of) and Conn has just given Nia a bag of Combos to snack on.
She tore into the bag like a kid would a Christmas present. She popped the first pretzel piece into her mouth and closed her eyes. Her lips moved in a circular motion and her cheeks hollowed. Then she moaned. The woman looked and sounded as if she was on the verge of an orgasm. From pretzels.
Jesus, how would she respond to his face between her legs, or his cock buried deep in her body while he kissed her? He was never going to make it through this night.
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9 Comments
Charmaine Gordon
Dynamite, Karla. What a great snippet. Your description made me salivate . . .and not from Combos.
Eleri Stone
I’ve never thought of combos as a sexy food before. I bet he doesn’t even know what show is on the TV:)
Veronica Scott
He does have it bad for her and I loved this description of how she’s eating her snack. Excellent excerpt!
Millie Burns
THis made me giggle. Nice job!
A.S. Fenichel
LOL. Love this.
Frank Fisher
Pretzels causing orgasims? Whoa! I think he will live through this night. Delicious snippet!
Caitlin
Those aren’t just any pretzels–they’re filled, right? Not that in his state, pretty much everything she does isn’t going to drive him crazy. He’ll probably have a heart attack if she touches him while they’re sleeping,
Sandra Nachlinger
Great sexual tension in this scene. I think he’s right — he’s going to have a difficult time making it through the night. (I started to type “hard time” but didn’t want to be too cutesy.)
Susan Stuckey
As said above – very nice tension in this. Will never think of “Combos” the same again. Well done, intriguing #8.