Sunday Snippet-Body of Work
This Sunday’s eight sentences are from my new release, BODY OF WORK, and part of the Weekend Writing Warriors meme.
In this snippet, Cassie has arrived at the gym and she’s walking through the parking lot.
She spied Brian’s dark-green Jeep near the door. Due to last night’s storm, the top was up and the doors in place. Not the norm. The man preferred it stripped to the bare bones, a deathtrap on four thick wheels. She’d only seen him driving it one time, but the image was a keeper. Ginger-haired lumberjack of a man with one hand on the wheel, one hand on the roll bar overhead, his left foot sticking out the doorless gap as he peeled into the lot. A man’s vehicle had never done much for her until the day she saw Brian in this Jeep. Consider her among the converted.
Can you picture him? I hope so!
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10 Comments
Violet Bedford
Wow. You should get a marketing job for Jeep! Great job of taking a simple thing like seeing his Jeep in the parking lot and telling so much about both characters.
A.S. Fenichel
He is a wonderful image. Love this eight and this book!
Elaine Cantrell
Yep, I can picture him. Well done.
Penny Alley
Nicely done. And with a hook at the end.
Veronica Scott
Oh yessss, I can picture him all right! Loved this snippet, terrific description!
Summer Ross
Converted- LOL
Great 8.
~Summer
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S. J. Maylee
Thank you for that image, Karla. Yum! 😀
Siobhan Muir
Sounds hot and fiery – the man, not the jeep. Great description, Karla. 🙂
Isabella Leigh
Mmm… that image you painted is almost enough to convert me, too…
Cindy Amrhein ( @historysleuth1 )
Ya I can picture it. Good job! Nothing like a man and his jeep.
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